Wow - Excellent. I love horror poetry. ;) The material is good; I like the way it's set up.

Tenika Dargan

O happy happy joy joy obviously! LOL it's cool, Rozzie. REALLY! Way ta go Donny! Sorry. It's cool...bye!

Wow... that was chilling... Here i am sitting hoping i get a reveiw and here you are writing wonderful poems... o my god that was so well writen. Keep Writing!

Oh... I really like this. I think that maybe it would be cool to do a couple of pieces to go with it, like from her view, from the murderer's view and also from the ocean's view...
"Her arms raised
To the surface
Requesting aid
That never came"
My favorite part. Goes for many real life situations as well... :(

I love how you "ellipsed" some parts, like the part "The water below" that's like a bridge between the previous and the next line. I never could quite get the hang of that.