Deep. You did an excellent job of relaying your message. Good job.

That was brilliant! Well done! I liked the way you carried on the images
"child bright as
a burning candle
dimmed by.."
Fabulous!

*claps* Beautiful. The imagery is so strong. It seems there's something everyone can relate to in this poem, I know I can. Wonderfully done. I'm glad I found it in the "Just Ins".
~Headstrong

can't say anything but... I LOVE IT! very nice! i know this might sound cliche, but this poem has depth. and i mean it.