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| i-see-faeries 2007-08-05 ch 4,  | abuseAw, this is sad. I feel so bad for Niall, and I can't help but think that Madalin is a bastard. I think they make a cute pairing though, and I can't help but hope their story ends happily. Safe to say, they're my favorite characters. But I do love this story, so update soon! ^^ |
| obsidiandreams 2007-01-18 ch 4, | abuseI read this story a long time ago but was too shy to review. I still really like it! Especially the twins. I am sad that things are not working out for them... or so it seems at the moment. I hope to read more soon. |
| Shadowy Fluffball 2006-07-09 ch 4, | abuseContinue! |
| Jenn 2006-04-28 ch 4, anon. | abuseOh wow this is really good! I REALLY wanna find out what happens next so UPDATE SOON PLEEAASSE! |
| Drazuki 2006-04-28 ch 4, | abuseNow for that decent review. I like the culture of the Sade, and the sheer difference of it from the other races mentioned. I love the interactions between Kalan and Moyo, and Moyo is quite a character by himself. The twins are very interesting, and I'm curious to see how their little scene unroll "come dawn". Ogashka is awesome, male or female. Her/his personality is quite interesting, especially coupled with Atishko's cowardly demeanor. Like the twins, I can't wait to see what happens with those two. Write on!-KT |
| Drazuki 2006-04-26 ch 1, | abuseOKay, I have yet to read this, but that will soon change! This is just to remind me to read this, since it'll be on my favorite stories. I'll provide a decent review... |
| Prisoner-11 2006-04-26 ch 4, | abuseInteresting... |
| Wolfwitch 2005-04-29 ch 3, | abuseThis is very, very interesting! I like the different races and they way you describe them through lazily dropped bits of information here and there. The story flows nicely. |
| Ailenat 2005-03-17 ch 3, | abusethis story makes me wish that I'm there as welleverything sounds so mystical its all so well-written and the characters are overflowing with charisma (especially Niall, i love that guy) |
| lami 2004-10-03 ch 3, anon. | abuseit's amazing. everythings so well thought out, i can't wait to read more of this. you have a real talent in my opinion, i've read some of your other work. this has to be one of my faves, so i hope you're still writing it. :) |
| Ree 2004-09-13 ch 3, | abuseWow. *incredibly impressed* That was GREAT! You should update again soon, because I'm now completely enamoured with your story. Great job! |
| Yohji 2004-08-17 ch 3, | abuseI liked it.. Your characters are really funny. Update soon.. > |
| Hopechest 2004-07-13 ch 2, | abuseWell, I stopped by to see if you'd updated. The story was going well, so I encourage you to continue this story. |
| Muna 2003-12-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseI'm gonna strangle you if you don't finish this! I know there were more chapters than this, chingu! Write more! In all seriousness, this is a great story - original language, interesting characters, engaging story, an actual grasp of proper English grammar and spelling... why did you stop? |
| lorelel 2003-11-03 ch 1, anon. | abusedang you changed it again! what is it...the third 4th time? Only thing is that it's so confusing and u change your username too...ne ways I hope u update soon, I remembered the time I read it I was on chapter 9 or something. |