|Reviews for So Ironic|
| Manuel Fajar 1/16/05 . chapter 1
Born with a loud scream,
Weeping, deep vale filled salt tears,
| floorcollision 8/5/04 . chapter 1
you're just so good! fave authors list! :)
| hamsta-boi 11/14/03 . chapter 1
a little btr
| soulspring 11/13/03 . chapter 1
its brevity and simple phrases make it all the more powerful.
| Dirty Wallpaper 10/27/03 . chapter 1
you know what the best thing about haikus is...they are short.
thats right, short.
they are like lipgloss *takes a moment to realise how shallow her comparison is* they are quick, effective, and damn good. just like this one, the power of this amazed me...the comparison, being way better than my pitiful one, was so heart shattering in its innocence, its simpleness, its gripping sadness...i swear its sadness was trying to suffocate my heart. wow is all i can say, worlds of kudos.
| obsidian katana 10/25/03 . chapter 1
great piece! you really couldn't cry when you were born? yeah, that is pretty ironic. nicely written, i like this. good job. keep on writing!
btw, thanks for the review. no that wasn't really me, i guess i can be a bit paranoid at times, but not to that extent.
anyway, keep up the awesome work!
| The Black Rider 10/25/03 . chapter 1
Talk about truth in advertising.
I liked this though. A lot of emotions expressed in a very brief amount of time.
| Mime 10/23/03 . chapter 1
Wow...what can I say? This is pretty breath taking, but not in the way usual haiku are. You're going on my fav's list. .
| Miz E. Mak 10/23/03 . chapter 1
Your haiku amazes me. I have felt this way many times... like last weekend... it is so truthful. It is a thought that one has when they cannot stop crying.
a beautiful piece... write on.
| Lidless Eye 10/23/03 . chapter 1
I liked the continuous flow of this. Great job, keep it up!
| glitterjewele 10/22/03 . chapter 1
wow, very intriguing indeed! reading it is like seeing the world turned inside out, because you'd think that when you're born is when you do cry, and later on in life you learn to suppress it . . . i dunno something inside me kinda did a weird semi-flip when i read it, 'twas strange in a good way ;). nice work!
p. for the short review, i'm lamentably short on time because it's midterms week. wish me luck! ;)
| CriesUnheard11 10/21/03 . chapter 1
sad...but is ironic...good job
| Taka and Keichirou 10/21/03 . chapter 1
i feel like laughing for some reason...this one is great...
| Children of the Root 10/20/03 . chapter 1
ah, makes you think. And saddens me. good work.
| Keep it 100 10/20/03 . chapter 1
You captured the irony perfectly.
Heart of the Sword