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Reviews For: The girl just cries

Ceron
2005-04-26
ch 1,
If you havne't already gone through this, I hope you never do. I've gone through this 3 times. But none have been my best friend except my grandfather, and my uncle... otherwise, I really like the poem.
Fatally Damned
2003-10-20
ch 1,
That was really interesting. I liked it alot more than I thought I would. Very cool. Fav-or-ite list.
Firgof Umbra
2003-10-20
ch 1,
Good descriptions.
I like the way you wrote this one, it definitely seems to have a heart.
Nothing was overly powerful in this piece, but the drama that unfolded was powerful enough.
You have a good style!
Keep writing!
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