Intresting... sad, good emotion coming from it... intresting style-istic choice...

i love it! it's tha way i feel everyday. scary

It's definately not one that's polished up, or thought much about, but it has an idea that's there...wanting to be grasped. Use it, write another poem, expand on this one...it begs to be finished.

Love this one, wow i think we're the 2 people in this world that actually understand eachother! love you xoxo

I think everyone should be able to relate, I know I can. I see it as a superficial mask we wear. We then seem to want to isolate ourselves, so that we can just be who we are. A great poem, One that makes you stop and think. :)

howdy!

this is really good! I like it alot, and I can relate, it always seems like I'm going in circles with problems or pain or blahblah. I know what you go through is different in SOME way from mine, but I can still relate.