Why does it stop!?!
This was getting really good, then BAM!
No update since 2004 O.o
That really sucks! I was seriously getting into this!
Oh well. Nice work and all that... it's just a shame you never finished it.
Erisah

i like. update please.

Pretty cool, still following the same basic model, and everything is working well! Please continue updating, but one request. Do something about Destruction, he's getting to be a risk to the Shadows. They have to know it by now.Thanks for sharing!

I think you should put the chaos series into a whole story/epic (like queen of glass).

It's raw, a little rough around the edges but there's talent there. ^_^

please please keep writing

nice! I like the interaction between mayhem and chaos. They complement each other well while there is a threat from destruction.Good conflict.I liked the puuled out of hat thing. please update

This tale has real promise. Things are much more believable than some of the events mentioned in the earlier stories, plus of course it helps that the characters are more developed.
There isn't the same jumping around from place to place and event to event as the earlier stories here, which also makes it much easier for the reader to concentrate on whats happening.
All in all, a good job so far with this, and I'm hoping you'll update it soon.
Spawny

this version is definitely better than the other one...i can't wait for your next update! hope it's soon...^_^

very well written! please update very soon ^^

IT'S BACK! yay! i'm so glad you put this story back on. i thought u had stopped writing it. :( i think i like the beginning of this one better than the other, although it is a little confusing. i'm glad destruction is back! g2g, but keep writing!

I like the way you have written this, it interesting. Not much more i can think of to write. It's good, keep writing!