@_@; Why did I not know of this? Jeebus. Anyway, great poem. I can't really comment at mechanics and whatnot because my knowledge of poetry is nonexistent. But at least I have another person to add to my favourites. -_-; Um... this is Amy, in case you're wondering, although I thought the "Jeebus" might've tipped you off...

Hey, this is really good! I'm surprised that no one reviewed this yet. Man, I wish I could write poetry like you...