I like this. The rhyme scheme is relaxing while the words are enthralling. I can relate, especially with the line

'Who are you

To condemn me

In my moment true

Of being free.'

Powerful stuff. Thanks for reviewing Sweet, Sweet, it's one of my favorites. Thanks for all your support too. Oh, and I love the poem. .

Toireasa

Hullo again. I am still reading through your things and I liked this one a lot, the flow of the words just keeps me reading.

beautiful, truly beautiful. seamless, smooth and entirely eloquent. i absolutely love this poem, the rhymes are effortless and the emotions are so raw. well done

heehee I likes this one much XD still reminds me of Alice...great game, freaky, but great. . yea...everyone should have their own personal cheshire cat _