So you can write poetry! Not bad for having to step out on a limb, it did have a story writer's feel to it with the lines you used, but it made it interesting. I liked the ending the best. Those lines "That was nine months ago, that night of fear and loss. He not only stole my innocence, but left me to pay the cost." made me want to hug you, it was so perfect.

That's sad! WOW! I really liked it! Really good!

wow! that was really good ash:) i'm impressed. don't say you cant write it that was...reality right there and very well written:) great job;)

your forever friend and fan,
Katelyn~*~

Wow. That poem is so true, so real. It makes people think. You're good. Did this really happen to you, or just a poem?

I liked that... it was good... Maybe you should try to write some more poems... :)