Reviews for No Longer Innocent

WarriorHeart 2003-11-25 ch 1,	abuseSo you can write poetry! Not bad for having to step out on a limb, it did have a story writer's feel to it with the lines you used, but it made it interesting. I liked the ending the best. Those lines "That was nine months ago, that night of fear and loss. He not only stole my innocence, but left me to pay the cost." made me want to hug you, it was so perfect.
Baby Milo 2003-10-22 ch 1,	abuseThat's sad! WOW! I really liked it! Really good!
katelyn devaney 2003-10-22 ch 1,	abusewow! that was really good ash:) i'm impressed. don't say you cant write it that was...reality right there and very well written:) great job;) your forever friend and fan, Katelyn~*~
PinkHair 2003-10-21 ch 1,	abuseWow. That poem is so true, so real. It makes people think. You're good. Did this really happen to you, or just a poem?
AngelicDaydreamer 2003-10-21 ch 1,	abuseI liked that... it was good... Maybe you should try to write some more poems... :)