 WarriorHeart 2003-11-25 . chapter 1So you can write poetry! Not bad for having to step out on a limb, it did have a story writer's feel to it with the lines you used, but it made it interesting. I liked the ending the best. Those lines "That was nine months ago, that night of fear and loss. He not only stole my innocence, but left me to pay the cost." made me want to hug you, it was so perfect. |