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Reviews For: A Second Chance

Elijah
2004-06-25
ch 1,
All of your writing is so excellent i wish i had talent like you do keep it up.
Mike Benson
2004-05-08
ch 1,
Nice piece of prose.
Devious Angel XDemon
2004-01-16
ch 2,
^_^! This was good, and expect my next chapter of suicide treatment..to be unbearable short...well, not -that- short, but shorter than the other chapters. I just wanted to get to Dragus's part as quickly as possible. haha.
~~ Daimon
RustPoisonedBlade
2003-12-15
ch 1,
That's awesome! i love it! keep up with the good work!
AethraZip
2003-10-25
ch 1,
This has to be one of the sweetest, saddest things I've read in a while. Love it.
Laerli
2003-10-22
ch 1,
This is good, I love the rhyming, I was never any good at it. My only question is I thought suicide was a mortal sin, and therefore the boy wouldn't go to Heaven. But, then, I know almost nothing about religion, so I could be wrong. I still like it, though.
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