nice viewpoint on a oinion. how bout

layers on layerscenters wrapped by smelly lies--a persons facade

a little to pesimistic(?) perhaps.

I like the "pearl blankets". It's interesting how you say they stay for warmth...onions are sometimes described as 'hot' when you bite into them... I like the "Union Embodied" partly because union is one letter off from onion...nice.

That was amazing :) It's truly fascinating how a small poem like a Haiku can be so perfect and meaningful. *Adds to favorites list* G'job!

Very nice description of an onion and it's many layers. This makes a good Haiku!

~Nellas

very cool.i like your poem.

Very cool. "Layered pearl blankets..." And I like the personification.

*grins* i never thought of it that way... but you're right. union embodied... in an onion. interesting concept- i like it!

Wow, that was really good, I never thought that a poeam about a veggie could sound so good!

wonderfull write nice work

you know, you should be the haiku queen too (or king if you're a guy!)!
=summerdazed=

HEY this is GOOD. Keep on righting man.

Okay, you know you're good when you can make an onion sound facinating.

Great poem, man. Just...utterly brilliant.
Sorry for the lack of comments. I kinda dropped of fp.com and Sword's Edge ^^;; So sorry. But anyways, GREAT poem. So simple, and so...fitting.
"Pearl blankets." That's such a cool description of a union.

You have given parts of the onion a use. It sounds like a living thing working in union with others.

Wow... taking an ordinary object and making it romanticized. Very clever.