| Reviews for My Haiku and Senryu Collection |
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smile persephone 2/10/05 . chapter 40I really love this one! Such beautiful imagery! Well done! |
simpleplan13 2/8/05 . chapter 40wow.. beautiful description |
Namir Swiftpaw 2/8/05 . chapter 40*GLOMP* Where have you been? I have missed you this big. *holds out arms* This is a wonderful haiku - I like the rainbow image. :) Keep writing! And hi! :D Namir Swiftpaw |
Anthony Draconius 12/12/04 . chapter 39Ahh my favorite season, its nice to see a good haiku about it. I like the way you used cold at the end of the 2nd line. The only thing I'd suggest is cheanging the word "green" into "greens". That is just sometihng of my taste though. |
simpleplan13 11/5/04 . chapter 39beautiful i like it |
moment2moment 9/22/04 . chapter 37Oh Seras, that is wonderful! One of my favorite by far. With love, Arashi |
simpleplan13 9/2/04 . chapter 37I like it.. nice descriptions |
simpleplan13 7/16/04 . chapter 36interesting... I liek it! |
simpleplan13 6/8/04 . chapter 35very true.. nicely done |
Systole 6/2/04 . chapter 34i liked it, very sensitive to colors and the purity of things. |
simpleplan13 6/1/04 . chapter 34very beautifully written... perfect description |
Anthony Draconius 5/28/04 . chapter 33I could not fully realize the beauty in this haiku until I read it while it was dark out. The night is filled with mystery and legends of ol and you did a good job in capturing that. Ecellent choice of words Seras. Love, Anthony |
simpleplan13 5/22/04 . chapter 31wow.. amazing description |
simpleplan13 5/22/04 . chapter 32hmm I can relate. nicely written |
simpleplan13 5/22/04 . chapter 33nice imagery... good job |