Wow! very powerful poem and I like how you protrayed your emotion in this poem. Its very heartfelt. keep up the good writing.

Very interesting perspective on time. I like how you personificated the clock, giving it its on point of view on its owners, and their time on this plane.

I especially liked the last three lines, from "I stand here, ever watcghin..." to the end. Very nicely put!

-Draith

It's so true. Time doesn't stop at all for anything or anyone. You're a pretty good poet you know. I wish you more luck in writing more poems.

Wow. Now that's powerful. That was great, it's going on my fave stories list. BTW, I love your name, I almost had a little sister named Siobhan (it's Fiona now). It's Irish or Celtic right?