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CNK 2003-11-29 . chapter 1
Your poems are deep and flow nicely, you seem to write from the heart.
superfufu 2003-11-27 . chapter 1
misery is inescapable. it could fool everybody with fake happiness and just blow the act just when you're getting a hold of it.
simpleplan13 2003-10-22 . chapter 1
ok I like this poem a lot & i can relate... I really like the no-one thats funky... Spelling error
nothings... nothing's
& The only thing is the first packing is confusing cuz if your packing then arent you going to leave? or is that just the title?? or am i an idiot?? lol... excellent poem!
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