The last line is cool... lol Nice choice of words. Although blocking feelings doesn't work... they're just going to come back and bite you in the arse. X__x;

Well put. You write of troubled times and my wishes are with you for times of a better origin.

Brava, Courtney, well done. I too like the last line. Pretty poem.

Meggie

Wow. Don't try to make that longer and force it, it's too perfect now to be ruined. I love the last line, but then again, I love most everything about it.

Nice. Abrupt, but works well and carries emotion.

clapclapclapclap

good work gurlie

Wow~ nice, really nice, especially the last line^^

darker strain of midnight! well done, not like meat-o.0