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moser 2003-12-03 . chapter 1
This is extremely touching. When I was Saved, I felt like this, and I really think that you did a good job on this beautiful poem, for God is really there for you when you need it.
Summer1 2003-05-21 . chapter 1
nice.
Jobey 2002-01-21 . chapter 1
This poem summed up a lot of universal beliefs for all Christains and gives words to my own thoughts wonderfully. It's so sweet. I'm going to have to save this for when I need a reminder that God is always there. Very nice. :-) -- Rheanna
Phaere 2001-12-01 . chapter 1
I´m happy for you that you found something to hold on. Even though I´m a wiccan I believe in Jesus, too. (I wouldn´t go so far as to call myself a Christian, but I like some of their ideas and beliefs). Jesus was a great man, and he will always be an inspiration and idol to humans. May He always walk with you. Blessings, Shazirah
Lily-chan 2001-05-06 . chapter 1
That was so beautiful. God be with you always...
Kyta 2000-04-21 . chapter 1
I, too, have been reading some of your poems and have been striken by the honesty and how much I think that we are similar. but I feel that everyone is similar and your honesty has opened yourself up and shown that all people are the same in the heart. Congratulations on having a relationship with Him. I too am a Christian, however right now I am struggling in my walk with Him. When I read some of your suicidal poems, I was a bit worried, but now that you have Jesus, I think things will be easier at times. But I too beat myself up over failures... You remind me of me 2 years ago (Im 16 now) Feel free to email me. I am kind of rambling as it's 1 in the morning, and my thoughts arent exactly together, but I think you get my drift. God Bless you sister:) >>> >> >> >>>>> >> >> >>>
One who's been through the pain 2000-04-11 . chapter 1
Congradulations!!!!!!!!! That's wonderful!!!!!!! I'm so happy for you!



I've read most of your other poetry, at a time when I was feeling down. I couldn't believe how much your poetry expressed exactly what I was feeling, except for the suicide part. I was alone and depressed. I'm better now, because of a great friend, loving mother and Jesus. I'm a Christian, have been for a long time and I was parying for you. I read your poem where you were asking where God was, everyone feels like that sooner or later, evem myself.



anyway,



congerats. May you find the piece and love you deserve. ;-)



Love,



A sister in Jesus Christ.



Larania 2000-04-11 . chapter 1
Lovely.
Naomi Sisko 2000-04-11 . chapter 1
~grins~ Beautiful, just beautiful. May God be with you on your journey through life.
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