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| ocnfused being99 2004-01-10 ch 1,  | feppressing abit, but its very true, much how i feel right now, good job |
| Wren Craven 2003-12-02 ch 1,  | Wow this was such a good piece! Thank you so much for reviewing my song "Breathing Underwater" and by all means, recommend it to one and all...my reviews are running thin, and i really appreciate it! You are also an awesome writer...keep it up! chloe |
| Cirien Phoenix 2003-11-25 ch 1, | This is GREAT! I love this piece. This is a thought provoking, magnificent poem. Excellent job! ~Cirien Phoenix of the Eternal Phlame |
| Fabala33 2003-10-31 ch 1, | I LOVE THIS! It is so powerful! Great job! |
| finding sanity 2003-10-29 ch 1, | i really like this poem.. alot. "my insides are probably dark/or hiding/for fear of finding themselves awesome! thanks for the review ~finding sanity~ |
| RingWraith14 2003-10-24 ch 1, | Thank you for the Review!! This is a very good poem! |
| Saharian 2003-10-23 ch 1, | Very good poem. I love the way you phrase it. "Within me,without me" is my favourite line. You sound confused about your true identity, like you're not sure whether he person you are on the outside is who you actually are or if you are the person you are on the inside or vis versa. At least that is how I interpreted it. Good job and keep writing. |
| IHJ 2003-10-23 ch 1, | Thought-provoking... Okay, I am definitely going to click on Author Alert to watch for new poems from you. *clicking Author Alert* I like the repetition of "within/out" and "why". Brings for a faster rhythm and the way you ended the poem with the beginning - nice. -Izzy J. |