thanks for reviewing my poem "Dream Time". I'm glad you liked it! plus I'm glad to find someone else who shares a fondness for sci-fi and Orson Scott Card :)

this story seems intriguing. it definitely has some potential, and i already like Janein's character. did you give up on it, or are you thinking of continuing the story?

I like your story so far; it reminds me of some of the books that I've read. I know this was basically just an introduction, so I'm anxious to see where the story's going to go. I didn't see any grammar errors or anything obvious so keep up the good work.