'Always touch the right places' uuh...gross. You should connect your sentences better. They sound very clipped and incoherent. The sentences are also alwaqys structured the same way. That makes the poem sound boring and repetitive.

and this makes me think of someone...who used to be. *sighs* oh well...well written poem!

This is SO great!
You thanked me in your summary... kool! :D
~Cancerian Queen~

Pssh, no one's ever written a poem like that for me! Hehe. It's awesome, one of my favs. Keep up the kick ** writing!

Ah, that was so sweet... Lovely.

Awwnessness. This is so kawaii. Beautiful in fact. *sighs* If only...well I won't start on those...they only serve to depress me. Great job. ^_^ I agree with Rose...