Whoo, try being in the dead middle of it. I'm from Virginia, and we got beasted by Isabel. It's quite an experience.

Very evocative. Nice descriptive vocabulary.

Wow. I especially like the line "droplets of air". It's hard not to feel it when a hurricane hits, isn't it? I'm in Wisconsin now, but my family and friends live in Connecticut and they got the tail end of that storm. Nice job anyway on the poem.