I loved your word choice in this. Again, you've painted such vivid imagery in your poem. Keep up the great work!!
~The One and Only

Nice. Love and Longing turn to Revenge and Hate.

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I really like this one. Well done!

very interesting. i think i like it though. keep it up. and i like some of your taste in music.. though not so much rap as techno. hehe. *TI*

how do u write these? like seriously, there really good.
this one had so much emotion in it, it makes ppl realize what actully goes on outside their own bodys.
-Siobhan

First of all 'dope poem'? BE MORE SPECIFIC! Oro -_-0 hippocrites..

Horrible poem, I must say, no meaning at all, I suggest you try a different format or do some different tactics to make it look better...some poeple would suffer just from reading this..

~*~The Goddess of Night~*~

You're a very talented writer! All your poems are amazing, keep it up!

wow.. amazing poem... great rhyming.. im not to sure about the format its a little to paragraphy for me... but still an excellent poem!