A sad story with an ending of longing. If only one day you don't feel it anymore.

Yes, I can follow it. And I'm adding it to my fav stories list. Cudos.
*Briley*

i like the repeating sounds in vowels and owrds in general, seems pretty free flowing. you are very eloquent in your writing, but your bio saddens me, you have to realize that many different styles of poetry are beautiful and intriguing. it's not really a good way to greet people. :\ anyway, a great poem, i look forward to seeing more! :)

btw, thanks for the review! :D

wow. You have some very powerful words and meanings. I love your word choices...and the way you fit everything together is splendid. I love it! ^.^
kat

wow thats really good your poetry never cease to amaze me you got some good talent there

-silver d formly petite rose

In all honesty I am quite lost, but i like the format & the rhyming! & the word chice... amazing words!