come up with an original title, ya thief, and stop stealing someone else's.

This story is so lovely. Your words are so eloquent and beautiful! You must hurry up and write another chapter!

I HATE THE MASONS! Why are they all so evil? Why is Charles so fat? Why is Carrig so tormented?
I am sometimes a little confused by the extensive imagagry, because sometimes its a little unclear. Also, when two people are speaking, its sometimes hard to figure out who it is because there's no breaks or indentations/ Other than that, everything is fine.
When is Rourke coming back into the story? I liked him!

Poor Rourke! Despicable Eilis! Nasty, girlish random Englishman! Why am I getting undertones of Allan-a-Dale when I read about him? Hm. . .

Man o man, I didn't know you wrote stories on fictionpress, too! And you like FM! *screams happily* FM is my favorite band of all time. I haven't even read the first chapter yet, but I had to review NOW and tell you how awesome you are justbecause you like FM!
Ahem. Yeah, pretend that I didn't just act like a psycho? Thanks. lol

I love your story. Okay, enough praise, time to relieve boredom. So...how was your birthday...and how is your Joseph CD? I'm sure it's wonderful. Especially when accompanied by the Jasper Family Singers. Was Richard the favored Lead Singer? I'm sure he enjoyed tort-I mean, serenading you. And how was Tracy's voice? Lovely as usual? Or did she just hide in her room--er, actually your room the whole time? The party in the foyer was great. Had a lot of fun. Now I have got to go, but if i think up of anything else to write, i will leave another. Heavens to Betsy I leave at least half of the reviews you get! Now what does that tell you about my social life? Jk JK!

Ahh! *groans* poor Carrig... no one deserves that type of cruelty, but least of all him! I am coming to associate the word Masons with evil. Anyhow, nice chapter (sorry, i took awhile to get to reading it, but I'm here!). I learned a few more new words from you again. ^__^

Hello! I got bored, as you can probably tell MK, so I decided to take up my favorite pastime and review for you again. So now you have 38 reviews. Impressive impressive. Hehehehe. Are you pumped for the picture tomorrow? If not tomorrow, then maybe the day after that. But anyways..your ficcie is bloody briliant, like I've told you many times before, and I would like you to update. And if you say *cricket chirp*, then I'll get Richard to fill the silence with his singing. Okay, better get back to work. I hope you appreciate the name...lol. Bye!

this is a cool story. i also like your scales in "in thy sorrow i will kiss your tears"

I hadn't known you updated until I looked at my own reviews and read your highly entertaining comments. On a personal note, they really made my day, as learning that you had updated!
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This Agnes seems quite the spitefire. I always appreciate a fiery female character, even if she is a bit stubborn and moody. Finally, readers know she's smart when she compares the Naiose woman to Helen of Troy. *Someone's* been reading Homer.
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I like the idea to show what's going on through the letter. It's very creative, and equivelant to a modern-day telephone...well, a rather long monologue for a telephone, but the information is quick nonetheless. And Agnes' finds this letter simply hilarious and absurd, which is a nice critique of "proper society". The letter itself is very proper society and eloquent; a very different voice than her own. Nice contrast.
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Irk! I love the word irk! Please update soon!
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*Faery Tragedy

"I'll thank ya for the things you did in my life."
OKAY,can you blame a fellow NDA student of boredom? I mean, sitting around, leaving not-so-anonymous reviews for you, and procrastinating for my French project seems so tempting. Hence, it's what I'm doing. Plus I'm down in Newton with nothing to do, and no one to talk to. Except for myself, and my mind even ignores me. I'm starting to go a little eccentric. But no worries. You're far down there too. Come to think of it, when did you lose it MK? Must have been Roachie's influence. I mean, running coach? Hello Fido. JK. I'm hearing an ice cream truck go by, and I hear laughing downstairs...probably at me...jk. How's Tracy's singing coming along? And the rest of your family's? Richard's? Oh god, don't wanna go there...maybe later. Hope you get all these...I've been busy. Just typing and typing and typing...going backwards. Man this is fun. Gotta look at all the spiffy addresses I made. Get out those pumps and shine them fairies! lol. And now I'm hearing Wheel of Fortunes sounds when she hits the panels...damn.Well I like this story in it's pure form rather than the snippet in the Medallion. Jeez...why did you kill Rourke in that version? Cause you were lazy and wanted to kill him? He's cool. Just like Earc...and any other cynical..annoying little buggers. Of course, Carrig would be added to that list if he weren't so damn NICE! Oh well...he's handsome, so we'll let him live, shall we? But that doesn't stop us from kicking his ** right?? TTYL MK!

Someone's bored, and it aint u MK. MK the Jenius. Gotta thank Alex for that one. It was her, wasn't it? Now lesse. It would be time for bountiful praise, but face it, I've already maxed out my quota, and you've already heard it. "I am handsome I am smart..."
"My boy's a genius..."
"When a fairy sprite, wearing pumps and ribbon's bright..."
LOL, much fun doing the musical. Thus I decided to put the name you loved using as my anonymous name, although it defeats the purpose since you already know who I am...*cricket chirp. cricket, cricket*
Okay...next chapter cause I'm bored as...a peach pie.

Wow. You've got to see all the wacky email addresses I'm making up as we go along. Nothing better to do as you see. Maybe I should do this for Gibson Girl even though it seems to be on life support, and you need help, and I've got issues, but those are no brainers. See, the things you don't have to think about are stuff like...I FRICKIN HATE PIP! PIP CAN ROT IN H-E-L-L WITH THE DEVIL. HE IS JUST A *BEEPING* (o. Mandy censors self. Lol)BRAT THAT DOESN'T CARE ABOUT ANYONE BUT HIMSELF. MAKE THE STORY ABOUT HERBERT(is forgetting his name...but I know it starts with an 'H') FOR CRYING OUT LOUD. THE BOOK WOULD BE SO MUCH BETTER! Ok, now that the rant is over...PIP DESERVES TO DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE!ok, so maybe not. But hey, Mercutio was allowed to be a schitzo...so hence...wateva. And Tybalt...o don't even get started...he's gay. Definitely gay.lol. great times in English class Paris. "Where is me rum? Me bloody rum, by my mum's cheese and crackers, where did I put that rum?"
" GOOD ST. BENEDICT, LET THE DEAD REST. IN PEACE!!"

La La La La. Okay, so I should be telling you how wonderful your story is, and gush about how great of a writer you are and such and such...but face it. I'm not a Carrig kinda person. I'm more like that English ** (not Agnes) lady that you're gonna put in later.At least I hope. Cause then there'd be a character that I can relate with, just like you. I suppose she would be easy to write for you, considering well...we aren't the nicest of people...I mean, how many ppl actually formulate ways to kidnap their English teacher's six-year-old son? Or take that red truck out for a joyride. Hehehehe. Lesse how many different kind of anonymous names I can come up with. I swear, one day more than half of these reviews are gonna be from me cause I got bored. Time to go annoy others just like Earc. That dude is my idol! And I hope Carrig get's his ** whipped soon, cause even though he's supposedly handsome...he's too nice for his own good...okay...there goes the sanity...gotta go catch it. TTYSOL. You betta be online. I'm sick of having one sided conversations with myself in these loony reviews in which I'm the only one with the cynical and witty thoughts. See...now Roachie and Regan are not cynical and witty. They're terrors for one, and Egotistical ppl, and losers, and completely insane...wait, nevermind. That's us MK, so they would be...idk...

Somebody's gotta update...Somebody's gotta update...nyah nyah nyah. Love the story MK, hate you! JK...I hate you because you always make impatient people with pitchforks like me wait, and the only thing to interest myself is leave all these pointless, stupid, but witty reviews for you. Plus it seems more impressive in your total, doesn't it? Sugary goodness rocks! Just like Earc the annoying bastard. Ah but I love cynics even more. Well now...gotta go find a red truck with a red head and a six-year-old in it. Meet you in Rockland's G-H-E-T-T-O McDonald's, kay? Then you have got to sit down and review. God I love leaving these stupid reviews. Makes me very happy, almost as much as being mean to Roachie (who could belong in the Mason's family no problem. I mean, she's got the ego and the accent down pat.heheheh)L8er...gotta go write a few more of these.