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Reviews For: Deadly Betrayal

Hacker Of Reality
2004-01-20
ch 1,
wow... so tragic... and yet so beautiful... although maybe thats becaused I often find tragedy to be beautiful and beauty to be tragic
KathrynJ
2003-10-24
ch 1,
Very well written, a story well told in a poem. As I read it I could picture the scene. Much enjoyed. Keep writing!
Punky Monkey
2003-10-23
ch 1,
good poem. i like the way every line is there for a reason. If u get me. Keep writing :)

Read some of my stuff if u have a min. :)
LoveFuryEnergyPassion
2003-10-23
ch 1,
Great work, very vivid (I hope it didn't really happen...)
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