that's sweet I hate haikus though.

I can't write these at all, don't have a clue how :) You obviously do though, good work. I liked it.

lol! i love it! it reminds of this one day at seminary...hehe...wow cuteThorn

I like it. That's all. No further comments.

not the best but i am worse at haiku. makes more sense them tomorrow.

Thanks for your review on my story. Don't take my words too harshly... I started writing when I was 15, and my first works totally sucked, it was a lot less good than yours. And you're one year ahead of me, so I'm sure you can make a lot of your writing, and it can be a very rewarding hobby. :)

I hope you take my critique as an attempt to help you improve, not as flaming. I don't write critiques on texts which I think are totally hopeless, only on those which I think have a future but can be made better.

Keep it up, and I'll keep checking back. :)

thats lovely. and if you call me yulia one more time im going to butcher you

Well I like it. It's all spiffy and stuff. I can't write haiku ^_^

This is a very good haiku.

that was pretty good for writing in 3 seconds

Hi,

This was well put. :)

Please R+R my poems if u can.

Thanks for sharing :)