What a wonderful concept isn't it? I loved this piece, considering I know what it's all true. Events like this happen EVERY DAY! You gave a wonderful depiction of personality at it's worst extreme: popularity and conventionality.
^^ This poems is so good it's making me cry. (Well, almost)
-Cindy Moon *)

dis is seriously awesome vincent...you shoud enter poetry contests and win a million dollar or someting!! join live poet society! may i read ur poem aloud to da club? pleaz!! it's so excellent
-encouraging u alwayz in writing *cuz i'm ur fan :P
janice

dis is seriously awesome vincent...you shoud enter poetry contests and win a million dollar or someting!! join live poet society! may i read ur poem aloud to da club? pleaz!! it's so excellent
-encouraging u alwayz in writing *cuz i'm ur fan :P
janice

dis is seriously awesome vincent...you shoud enter poetry contests and win a million dollar or someting!! join live poet society! may i read ur poem aloud to da club? pleaz!! it's so excellent
-encouraging u alwayz in writing *cuz i'm ur fan :P
janice

dis is seriously awesome vincent...you shoud enter poetry contests and win a million dollar or someting!! join live poet society! may i read ur poem aloud to da club? pleaz!! it's so excellent
-encouraging u alwayz in writing *cuz i'm ur fan :P
janice

Bravo! I agree with you completely; popularity is ridiculous, yet terribly important to many. And it's disgusting the lengths to which some people will go.

Anyway, I really enjoyed your poem, which had an excellent plot as well as a good message. Thanks.