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| magicstars 2006-07-25 ch 1, | its really interesting, the way she's finding out about her past and stuff. great idea! i enjoyed this please carry on! |
| Heart of sunshine 2005-12-03 ch 1, | really good and REALLY long! too bad there isn't more! |
| Rach 2004-09-18 ch 1, | HI!. um very intresting. please update soon see ya |
| Jessie Flower 2004-02-26 ch 1, | WOW! Now that was really good! No scratch that it was totally amazing! Wow very insightful. I really really liked it, look foward to reading your other works! |
| Kithic 2003-11-02 ch 1, | Fantastic. Very good detail, information and amazing forshadowing.Please keep going! |
| Zak 2003-10-24 ch 1, | I liked it. I think it's a great idea. And it definatly has the trip factor, Take it from me :-) i cant find anything wrong with it but if I was mrs keopke id make you re write it! |
| Dan ( your good friend) 2003-10-24 ch 1, | Ok!! now you need to come out with more of the story cuz this is great (plz exsuce language) great ** **! lol no but really. everytime I see your stuff, they get better everytime. I know I am not the only one that thinks this as well...well I doint want to make this to long so im out. OH!! YEAH! one more time GREAT **! |