 Lidless Eye 2003-12-24 . chapter 1I loved the meaning to this, and how it was set up. It was very innovative. Keep on writing!
~Lidless Eye |
 Summerdazed 2003-12-14 . chapter 1hehehehhe this is co cute! delighting (if there's a word like that) and entertaining!
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 Jimmy Jazz 2003-12-08 . chapter 1He he he, this is really good. The way you set it out was the best. Very unique. |
 Morncreek 2003-11-09 . chapter 1Wow! This is a different and very refreshing format. But before I go into ech one, I would like to say that they are spelled 'prologue' and 'epilogue'; the U comes after the G.
"Internet" ~ I totally agree. The Internet is vast and I am ready to do some more exploring!
"What Would You Live For" ~ Many people are ready to die for a cause - that's easy. Living for a cause - that's tough.
"Dead Heart" ~ Quite true, and, metaphorically speaking, applicable to many situations.
"Surprised?" ~ This one makes me wonder who "you" is.
"Stolen Skills" ~ Yep. Each person has his or her own talent/skill, unique in its strength. Only that person can use that talent/skill, and make it grow.
"The Second Child" ~ Oh, do I identify with this. I am the youngest of five, and because I am "the good child" my parents give more attention to my siblings. The impact of making sure a child is not lonely is gigantic to that child. Strength comes from that.
"Best Friend" ~ Beautiful, and the way true friendship is.
"Sorry" ~ This kind of feels like hollow sympathy to me, though I know you don't intend it to.
"Hidden Voices" ~ Nicely expressed.
"My Cat Was Driving" ~ One word: funny!
"Forgetful Me" ~ This is one didn't just make me laugh my socks off, it knocked me off my chair! I shared it with my mother and she loved it, too.
"Only the Judges Will Know" ~ >_< You just had to add more pressure, didn't you? Didn't you! ^_^ Just kidding!
"OOps" ~ Heeheehee - sounds like something my brothers would say. Quick question: Do you use the 10-second or 5-second rule, or not believe in such rule?
"Cranes" ~ I love that story about the girl who tried to make 10 origami cranes so she could be cured. It is so sad, yet beautiful, too. Wonderful message. |
 Kelly A. Brown 2003-11-08 . chapter 1Wow, this is awesome! You are such an amazing haiku writer! :D |
 obsidian katana 2003-10-25 . chapter 1wow...awesome piece! love the idea, very creative and well written. i especially like "stolen skills," "hidden voices," and "oops" and i wish i could get it into my mind what you said in "only the judges will know" great job on all of these. keep up your superb writing! |
 The Black Rider 2003-10-25 . chapter 1An utterly enchanting and delightful series of haikus as well as being incredibly complex. Great to see the cut poem being put to use. |
 Anjeni Windsinger 2003-10-24 . chapter 1Lol, this was great. I love "Dead Heart", "Hidden Voices", and "OOps" the most... especially "OOps" :)
Awesome work, Mime! I really enjoyed them ;) Keep writing. |
 Sarah (frompenspilt) 2003-10-24 . chapter 1 Hey, this is wiqqid, totally original lol. But yeah you reviewed one of my pieces (thanks bunches!) and you said you didn't agree with how i said music is **, well i don't agree with that either, but i just basically meant life is **.. I think, lol. But yeah i'm a total music junkie :-p.
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