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Lidless Eye 2003-12-24 . chapter 1
I loved the meaning to this, and how it was set up. It was very innovative. Keep on writing!
~Lidless Eye
Summerdazed 2003-12-14 . chapter 1
hehehehhe this is co cute! delighting (if there's a word like that) and entertaining!
=summerdazed=
Jimmy Jazz 2003-12-08 . chapter 1
He he he, this is really good. The way you set it out was the best. Very unique.
Morncreek 2003-11-09 . chapter 1
Wow! This is a different and very refreshing format. But before I go into ech one, I would like to say that they are spelled 'prologue' and 'epilogue'; the U comes after the G.

"Internet" ~ I totally agree. The Internet is vast and I am ready to do some more exploring!

"What Would You Live For" ~ Many people are ready to die for a cause - that's easy. Living for a cause - that's tough.

"Dead Heart" ~ Quite true, and, metaphorically speaking, applicable to many situations.

"Surprised?" ~ This one makes me wonder who "you" is.

"Stolen Skills" ~ Yep. Each person has his or her own talent/skill, unique in its strength. Only that person can use that talent/skill, and make it grow.

"The Second Child" ~ Oh, do I identify with this. I am the youngest of five, and because I am "the good child" my parents give more attention to my siblings. The impact of making sure a child is not lonely is gigantic to that child. Strength comes from that.

"Best Friend" ~ Beautiful, and the way true friendship is.

"Sorry" ~ This kind of feels like hollow sympathy to me, though I know you don't intend it to.

"Hidden Voices" ~ Nicely expressed.

"My Cat Was Driving" ~ One word: funny!

"Forgetful Me" ~ This is one didn't just make me laugh my socks off, it knocked me off my chair! I shared it with my mother and she loved it, too.

"Only the Judges Will Know" ~ >_< You just had to add more pressure, didn't you? Didn't you! ^_^ Just kidding!

"OOps" ~ Heeheehee - sounds like something my brothers would say. Quick question: Do you use the 10-second or 5-second rule, or not believe in such rule?

"Cranes" ~ I love that story about the girl who tried to make 10 origami cranes so she could be cured. It is so sad, yet beautiful, too. Wonderful message.
Kelly A. Brown 2003-11-08 . chapter 1
Wow, this is awesome! You are such an amazing haiku writer! :D
obsidian katana 2003-10-25 . chapter 1
wow...awesome piece! love the idea, very creative and well written. i especially like "stolen skills," "hidden voices," and "oops" and i wish i could get it into my mind what you said in "only the judges will know" great job on all of these. keep up your superb writing!
The Black Rider 2003-10-25 . chapter 1
An utterly enchanting and delightful series of haikus as well as being incredibly complex. Great to see the cut poem being put to use.
Anjeni Windsinger 2003-10-24 . chapter 1
Lol, this was great. I love "Dead Heart", "Hidden Voices", and "OOps" the most... especially "OOps" :)

Awesome work, Mime! I really enjoyed them ;) Keep writing.
Sarah (frompenspilt) 2003-10-24 . chapter 1
Hey, this is wiqqid, totally original lol. But yeah you reviewed one of my pieces (thanks bunches!) and you said you didn't agree with how i said music is **, well i don't agree with that either, but i just basically meant life is **.. I think, lol. But yeah i'm a total music junkie :-p.
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