yeah! i can read and see again! umm..ok, its an ok poem, like the idea around it though!

format yuch!

yeah! thats a good poem! hi! thanks for the reviews! Good use of words and where you put them ...

if you get what i mean !

keep writin

cya!

Your formatting is messed up.

Please fix it.

Sorry if I sound rude, but I'm trying to make it so more people will read your writing.

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That's my site that helps out with formatting problems with poems. I suggest you check it out (but don't click on any of the links - they're broken).

Your poem has a nice idea behind it, but I really am having a hard time reading it because of the messed up formatting.

Namir Swiftpaw