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| crimson cyanide 2006-11-26 ch 1,  | abuseI can relate to this really easily: invisible to friends, crushes, schoolmates -you doubt they even know your name! All your poems are incredible, especially this one and 'suicide' -two of my all time favourites! |
| A Dark White Rose 2006-10-12 ch 1, | abuseawsome poem. really cool I wish u luck on your writingA Dark Rose p.s. please update on your story 'one last breath' i really love that story never give up on your writing -story or poems |
| Indubidably 2005-05-13 ch 1, | abuseI completely understand this. Im really shy and people ignore me, i hate having lots of attention, but i hate being ignored, sometimes you just want people to notice you and see you but tey dont, i love your poems they are beautifully written and depressing, which is very good! KEEP IT UP! YOU ROCK! |
| ThatReallyCoolGirl 2005-04-28 ch 1, | abuseI swear it's like your reading my mind. Awesome stuff, buddy. |
| Mystical princess 2005-01-27 ch 1, | abuseThis is exactly how I always feel. I love it. |
| Kinkybell 2004-12-15 ch 1, | abuseHeya this is gd:) ive done one a lil a while ago. its on mine so jst click away:P Luv Steff |
| Elaina Hays 2004-11-28 ch 1, | abuseI liked this poem. I feel the apparent pain of how badly the writer wants to be seen...you have a gift for making the reader feel the emotions you are. Very, very good. I like it! |
| SleepDontWeep 2004-08-06 ch 1, | abusethat was amazing!! i always feel exactly like that!! u captured d feelin extremly skillfully! welldone! i like d way in which u write and space out ur poetry!! wud u do me a huge favour and review one of my stories? please id really appreciate it!! |
| H. M. Banson 2004-07-26 ch 1, | abuseA relatable poem, indeed. |
| Death Princess 2004-05-02 ch 1, | abuseYeah i can relate 2 that thass how it was like in my last scool my frends wud be messin round and id just be standin there invisible... well i guess its betta then hvin no frends at all (bin thru that 2... yes i hve a very sad existance)ok why im tellin u this i dunno but bak 2 ur poem iss gud! |
| Whitesiren 2003-10-24 ch 1, | abuseI can relate to this... it's quite hurting at times. I like this alot. Write more! |
| MooMooMoo 2003-10-24 ch 1, | abusei usually don't read poems but i really like yours. I feel the same way sometimes, but i have no talent. keep writing, you're great at what you do. |