I love this story, I really think you should make into a book! You're so talented.

Okay, I cannot believe I never reviewed this. It jumps to my mind every time I think of brilliant writing, honestly. We were reading short stories in English class, and I couldn't help but focus on how much more profound and breathtaking this was than anything we were required to read.
It is simply...the best. Well, this or Lipstick, which comes to mind, also. You are so beyond amazing.

I love the use of colour in this story. It seems pretty overdramatic. Eh. Whatever rubs your buddha