Holy sh*t that ending got me by surprise, but it was really good. This was like, an amazing story. You're a great writer.

From this point on I shall no longer review until the end of the novel, because I am sure that getting so many emails to your account... unless you want all these reviews, which, if that is the case, alert me and I will be HAPPY to go back and place in more commentary. For now, though, I shall review and then leave you a HUGE review at the end.

Cheers, Helena Emma Soliloquy

HURRAH RAVE FOR GIVING CERIN TIME DESPITE THE FACT THAT I'M SURE HE WANTS TO SCREW HIM INTO HIS BED! and oh shitz... TAWNY! WHY DID YOU SAVE RAVE'S NAME T_T

Uh-oh I have a BAD feeling about Tawny and Rayen right now >_< but Rave and Cerin... BRING IT ON! jeje

Tawny is a naughty little wanker there... >_

Oh wow, Rayen shot Tawny DOWN! That must of hit Tawny's ego quite a way... Oh more drama with Rave...

Cerin's grounded jaja... looser jeje only kidding, poor chap =[

TAWNY YOU LIL' SKANK! FORGET RAVE 'CAUSE RAYEN IS RIGHT THERE FOR YOU!

rant ends.

... he reffered to himself as "the Rave" T_T'

Jaja, Helena

Tawny, forget Rave and go with Rayen... enough said. =]

"I mean I gave him head, he should be thanking me"

CERIN! YOU ARE NOT A ** AND MY GOD ITS OKAY TO HAVE LITTLE FUN WITH BOYS... ESPECIALLY FOR US FRUIT FLY GALS' =]

mehr... *clicks next chapter*

-HES

The title to this chapter: "m, yummy favor" SLAYED me... ^_^=

Confliction of the heart... oh no dear Cerin... this is not good for someone who has stated on multiple occasions that what Rave has been doing is a sin... ^_^

- Soliloquy

*DRAMATIC MUSIC QUE*

Jeje, I must say... I love the way you write Rave's thoughts... very sensual and it makes ME blush.

X_X

"He grins a little and twists his hand so he’s in control."

Jaja, once me and some blokes were all testing who has a dominant hand hold... a lot of the girls were rather insulted when they found they held hands more in lead than their male counterparts. jeje