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MyOldSoul 2009-11-03 . chapter 3
I myself hate comparisons but I can't get over it, this reminds me so much of the movie "Ghost". And also the 'being crushed by someone attempting suicide' reminds me of a tragic accident in some French movie. Anyway, I love the story so far, I have a long way to go! I've been searching far and wide for a good read but so many are being removed! I'm glad I was able to catch this one.

=) -Life9
Alanis (Laughingnerd) 2009-11-02 . chapter 9
Gawr! I love your story you need to update and I love the firsst chapter where they meet. So... cute and funny! Please update!
XxXYet-AnotherLazyTeenagerXxX 2009-10-23 . chapter 9
OMG..U are a freaking genius at writing...i would PAY to read your stories ...AWESOME DUDE.
Gemma 2009-10-18 . chapter 9
:D i read this story of yours a while ago and re-found it
desperately hoping that there would be another chapter
PLEASE continue your story because try as i might, there are no others just like it on fictionpress, and i LOVE your storyline! Thank you very much
Regin 2009-09-13 . chapter 9
I Like, I Lust, I Love!!Please Update Soon!!
Hop Skip Jump 2009-09-07 . chapter 1
My doctor says that for the benefit of my health, you should update and finish this story.

Doctor's orders! How can you say no to that?
Death of Innocence 2009-09-06 . chapter 1
I love this story! Update soon.
lindsaydelina 2009-07-30 . chapter 9
OH MY GOODNESS!! i absolutely LOVE this story. Def one of my favorites. I'll be reviewing from here on. Can't wait. This is amazing! Great job!
VonThunder 2009-07-26 . chapter 9
Oh wow! I love this story!! It's original...very very original! I love it, especially the characters! Update soon! :)

~VonThunder
charm en route 2009-07-11 . chapter 9
If you ever decide to update this again, that would make me very happy.


:D
P.F Ally 2009-05-07 . chapter 9
Update?
Scarlet scribbler 2009-04-21 . chapter 9
Your killing me! Why oh why must you cliffhang thee?
iKinky 2009-04-16 . chapter 1
Oh my god
entity.unkown 2009-04-15 . chapter 9
haha, addicting. update please :]
Klebs 2009-04-09 . chapter 2
this guy reminds me of 'Jesse' from the Mediator series.
LOl that was funny how she'd been babbling the whole time
not really expecting anyone to hear her and suddenly
Cian happens to be an 'i see dead people' person.
Thats definitely something i would have done-
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