Your poetry is simply eloquent. I love your writing style, it is very distinct and lyrical, like good poetry should have. You've also got wonderful observations. Keep up the good work. Hasta luego.
chibichocobo

This poem was maybe a little frightening near the end, and the images of the dancer really tied in evry well with what was being said. For example, :
'A stream of talent-less confidence
She sways her hips like she knows.'
Flows very nicely. Good job ^^ thanks for the review.

this is good! hehe i can relate to this...i took ballet for 3 years when i was younger =P

i'm at a lost for words...it's beautiful. (thanks for the reviews and trying to keep up with me!)

This was a really neat concept. A very refreshing topic that makes you think as well. Good work.
~Lidless Eye

Lovely how you grouped lines into quick stanzas of three. Short and powerful.
Very acute, interesting observations... I hope your classmates aren't *all* too bad. :)
Keep writing!

wow! that was really good. i've never been the dance class type (probably because i am too uncoordinated) but that is what i would imagine some of the people to be like ("a harlot in pink satin...") i LOVE your poetry. keep up the good work!

Reading this makes me so grateful I refused to take dance class even when my mother practically begged to go ;p

Don't say you've conformed to their side! Just kidding! You're probably thinking who the hell is "their side?" Anyway, keep up the writing.

dance class...o.o...sounds terrible...oh..and I can never imagine you in hot pink...