 JenniferStarling 2004-08-14 . chapter 1I need to find out what has happened but I found a typo: "I didn't ever mind the though of dying amongst my four best friends."
YOu missed a "t." |
 Luv2write4u13 2003-11-15 . chapter 5I don't get this at all |
 Luv2write4u13 2003-11-15 . chapter 4So I guess Jamie's the pop star. Why such a boyish ugly name? Why? |
 Luv2write4u13 2003-11-15 . chapter 3I didn't really like this chapter. It's so short and all. I actually was about to make Lana my favorite character because of her name. |
 Luv2write4u13 2003-11-15 . chapter 2Saphire is a pretty name. Matt is a bum and I'm going to kick his butt when I get a chance. Scan his picture on your profile. LOL, just kiddin. |
 Luv2write4u13 2003-11-15 . chapter 1Interesting, real interesting |
 FAKE?romances 2003-11-15 . chapter 5mm THX for all yr reviews *hug* i really like this story and all your other ones and id review them all if i had time [ i dont lol ] but yes. VERY nice. i like your writing soo much...more?
~b |
 BarairoElf 2003-11-15 . chapter 5o I'm noticing a major trend with your characters and not liking love hahaha... their so pessimistic... perhaps reflecting your own thoughts on love,eh eh? *nudge nudge*
RACOON *runs away before she can be maimed* |
 FAKE?romances 2003-11-14 . chapter 4very good, im surprised it duznt hav any other reviews...thx for yr review on mi story...i like it, keep going. |