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| nasake-suneku 2004-06-15 ch 1,   | >:) I LOVED this one. Awesome job. _Tiffany M._ |
| Deadly Fate 2003-11-03 ch 1, | This was a great poem. It was nice n spooky...like a nightmare or a shitload of bad memories. I really liked it! |
| IHJ 2003-10-25 ch 1, | "Spinning in an endless circle you past become present" Good ending though it seems somewhat outta scan. (format) Oh, I LIKE this poem. It's dark and slightly nightmarish/surrealistic. "Only nightmares can you ride" I really adore this line. Night-mares, day-mares, dusk-mares, twilight-mares *pausing* OOps, sorry there! Descriptive, nice poem! -Izzy J. |