Really happy that you continued, Just like the weather

I liked the first part of Just Like The Weather and was very happy when I saw that you continued it. Can't wait for an update

I read the first part of this..it was good..this one seems even better...keep it up...update soon plz :)

mm, its good. interesting. mack's sadness is almost tangible. in like this chapter. hearing mack's voice is interesting, after all this time of dagmar, dagmar, dagmar.

I haven't read the first installment yet, but I can say this definetly got my attention. Keep posting.
Kiaring

And to think I thought Melanie was nothing compared to Mack.

You're a master at creating strong impressions of people through dialogue, though it amazes me how your characters are always unafraid to say exactly what they want to.

Get cracking on the next update then, please.

oh. you. so. have to continue.

sorry for being MIA, too long... but this so needs to continue.

pwetty pwease? *pouts*

that was ... hmm. i liked it, in one way, and i thought it was fairly stupid, in another. but it was good. it had poise, style. it was interesting, and intriguing, but i'll refrain from saying more until i've read more of it.