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Yojireru Kihaku
2004-05-27
ch 1, 		whow... that was cool. it was really cool.
Kathryn Merlin
2003-10-26
ch 1, 		isnt it japanese water torture? (as in, not chinese)

anyway, good story, but u need to work on grammar, spelling, etc.
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