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| IWasGoingForStealth 2004-06-20 ch 1,   | Ooh! I love this poem. It is so cute and funny! And it's so amazing that you found words that rhyme with 'bed' on every odd line. Well written! |
| Yojireru Kihaku 2004-05-27 ch 1, | I liked this poem alot. It was cute in a way. And if you are interested I updated Searra. |
| flowerthief 2003-12-13 ch 1, | Hehe. Funny. Most of it rhymes but some parts don't. It's still really good. How old is this little kid though? I've never heard a kid say "homestead" but maybe thats just me. Thanks for your review. AC |
| Two Fish 2003-10-29 ch 1, | So funny! Sounds like me when I was little! I was paranoid of stuff like that. Or maybee just insane and delusional.. Either one works. Anyways, very cute poem!! I can relate! |
| Kathryn Merlin 2003-10-26 ch 1, | this is so funny! i love it! |
| Jane Austen the 2nd 2003-10-26 ch 1, | lol this is very cute the end gave me a few chuckles. You may want to read some of my poetry it is more serious then this but still enjoyable:) pretty pink:) |