Springheel Jack's weakness isn't women is it?

you had well developed characters, and great description. i hope to see more, you're a wonderful writer. I loved the description of springheel jack, everything .. his touch, his noises, his appearance that was wonderful. i could see the chemistry btw abby and liam.. and an awesome death for springheel jack, you're very creative. and i liked the ending line.. lol. good job.

Wow. That's about all I can say about the quality of this story. I didn't catch any grammatical errors, your characterization was excellent--and might I add, amazing imagery! I could almost feel those claw-like fingers reaching for me. And the ending--astunding. Definitely going on the favorites list.