I like the flow of this peice. Luvin ur work. Keep at it. Luv loz. x

Beautiful descriptions... excellent meter... well done...

This is the "Nazi" author. I was not calling you a Nazi, I just came to the conclusion because you wrote in your Profile, "Beware of the Nazis" er somthin like that. And, I do not post my email for a reason. I am mostly at school doing this reviewing and My mom is ** about me being on a site with "Freaks".

ooh, i like this one a lot...i like the formatting, with the last three lines sort of seperate, it sort of emphasises it...i like the overall feel of it too, sort of back and forth...great job

aww...cute!

This is very good. I like how you put the ending. Thanks for the review, and exually I don't know what Harrow means, it just rymhed, (excuse my spelling) Great poem, don't be affended. I never write much on anyone's stuff, I'm not a talker. Great great job. I loved the line a reality-are you here, so awesome, so grand! Bravo bravo ^ ^
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Great flow of words, and a great way to write it. Keep up th good work. ^_^

Awesome, That is really cool. I like it.

Oh, I had no idea that you wrote poetry!

Ahem, anyway...short and introspective without being 'me, me, me'. A poem that balances well, somehow. Very much enjoyed this.

Mia

wow, your good, very very good. thanks for erm... helping me w/ my little problems w/ my poem ::blushes:: you rock, ur poem is really good. the lines make it very interesting

Cute!! Likes alot~ By the way, kitty cutes too^^

~Never the same~

its strange and makes you wonder... It was good.

hey there, thanks for reviewing my stuff. i like what i've read of yours..thus far..this is where i throw in the term "prolific" to describe you, WAIT, i hate that word. anyway, please do continue writing.

Lovely wording...Someday I'll get around to reading all your stuff. This is all I have time for now...sorry. Yes...I love reading stuff I can relate to...sorry, can't think much at the moment^_^

wow. I like it. I generally dont like poems written in this sort of odd format, but this captures my attentions. Good Job.