Reviews for Dear Soulmate - FictionPress.com

Shade2 2003-11-09 ch 1,	I have the same sort of thoughts at times . . . this was good. Poetry doesn't have to be broken lines. Beautiful. One error: in the second "what if" of the last paragraph (yes, I'm picky)_you put 'tif' instead of 'if'. Doesn't really matter, I'm just an unceasing perfectionist. Amazing poem/letter thing.
Aryante 2003-10-26 ch 1,	hey, wow, that's really great! I loved it! Damn it! Where's MY soulmate?
Seeker of the Way 2003-10-25 ch 1,	For some reason, it works. No, it is not a poem or a story, but it does have a powerful emotional resonance which is poetic. Also there are a few typos you should attend to. But, other than that I can relate with this all too human cry to the cruel shadow-infested winds from another tour of the in-places-to-meet-people fails miserably. I liked it, it was bitter-sweet.