Eep, what a description... nice use of lexis/metaphor/imagery in general.
"What do you think?" - lol, this really takes the edge off Sky's fear, and the atmosphere... nice effect.
"Is it to much?" - hehehe, very good. But it's 'too', not 'to'.
Sky's appropriately shocked. lol.
"hoards of malice" - 'hordes'
This demon/evil bloke... seems strange to me. Sometimes he's almost... well, CHEERFUL... and then he's evil again... ahh, demons. *shrug* I like the way Sky's brave enough to stand up to him a little, but is realistically scared, too.
Yay! Keikai c'est back - The difference between his and Hereth's reassurances is fantastic... I wonder why Hereth's so serious...
Good stuff - and thanks for your reviews!!
- sofi x

An angel!

Oh no... things aren't looking good. (Okay, so they weren't looking very good beforehand...) Interesting concept of the black light. Perhaps it's so visible because it drinks in, rather than giving out, natural light. And why does this guy want to see Sky? *bites nails* Great anticipation built up here- i can't wait to find out what's on the other side of that door.
One tiny nitpicky grammar point- 'feelings are just feelings, their not right'- you want 'they're', not 'their' in this case.
Don't take so long to update again! I waited with breath so bated that I nearly collapsed from oxygen deprivation. ^_~
Hey, don't worry if it's short- you're right, chapters finish where they finish. So long as you UPDATE SOON. *glares*
Keep writing! Nice ending sentence, by the way- really added to the tension. ^_^
- sofi x

Excellent Story! I decided to look at this one because of the summary, and am very pleased that I did. The only constructive critique that I have is sometimes spell check is a good thing. That is not meant in a bad way because the way things are spelled add character, but sometimes it would make the story go a little smoother. Thank's for reviewing my story.
Severian

...az thanks to me?...no dear...i thank you...but anyways, really good. you write good so you know what i'm going to tell you, that it you don't write faster, well i'll have to send you to the pound, love it all the same and yes i will try to get chapter three up just hold on. really good...write more, and faster...

This was a really go story! I liked it alot! Its better than some other stories I'v read over the past!

Oh, poor Sky.. bad dream, very bad. *smacks dream* heh- i know you've only just introduced him as a character, but i love keikai! it might be his name... and his colouring (i have this small little fetish for dark hair and grey eyes *ahem*) but i really like him.. shallow, me? nah...
And the way you described the way sky feels about him like family was so sweet! Made me feel warm and fuzzy. :P *gives random hugs*
Also, i didn't say this before- i think the idea that her eyes reflect the sky on earth is wonderful. (the oddest thing.. i have a character called skye in a story i've not put up here whose eyes change colours... my telepathy is springing into play once more it seems...lol.) i think you should put something about her eyes in a summary for your story- it'd attract me, just cause i'm a sucker for poetic and pretty ideas :D
Thankyou SO much for reviewing my story! i really love to receive reviews, they make my day. I got yours just a moment ago when i got home, put a smile on my face! :D :D (see? smiles!)
hehe. okay, i'll go now.
Keep writing.
- sofi x

Hello again, I do not believe that I reviewed this yet so here it is! Nice begining to a dreamers nightmare.

Yay wings! (sorry, the first thing i noticed about this story- i get distracted easily...*turns around with wide eyes, pointing at things* *shrugs*) I love wings... really intend to work them into one of my stories at some point. *scribbles down note to self*
Fascinating idea for a plotline, by the way! Fairy-Sky-who-is-not-really-a-fairy-but-an-angel-sort-of is a great character!
On a side note- this is not criticising your story- your plotline is your plotline hehe.
*clears throat* Demons are highly misrepresented in modern society!
Speaking on behalf of the real demons out there (the ones with the nice cars and good music), we're not ALL out for the destruction of mankind... mankind is so much FUN! We wouldn't, technically, have a job without you guys, after all- who are we supposed to lead into sin if there aren't any humans?
*ahem* *cuts off rant* *shakes head*
um, great stuff-
Hell, isn't autumn a spoilt little brat?
*strangles fairy*
*realises she has just killed your character*
*backs away from your glare*
*runs*
Ack- i'm so random it scares me...
-Keep updating!
- sofi x

Looks good... i hope to read the rest soon as you did for me. thanks! I love a new reviewer!

hey my ever faithful wolf pupy. take a good guess who it is. you have to write faster and make it a good polt tiwst. hehe...I will hopefully see you soon on safe list on your email put me on. Great story you have going you are going to be a greart writer.

Hey Kitty, chii! It's Chi,chii! Chi loves the story so far,chii! And Chi likes Sky of course,chii, and Chi likes the parts where Sky get's hurt,chii. Fufufufufufufuu! Anyway, Chi is going to go and plug into the "Matrix", chii.
The Matrix has you...

Kittay, I still say you make the demons choke her with her halo and let her drown in her own blood. But, whatever you do, I'm sure it'll be just as great! ^_^ Nice chapter, WRITE MORE! Mwahaha!

Hey. oh my god you write so good. cant want to here whats going to happen next. i love the charactors and how they all have their own personalities and are not all the same keep writen mayby i'll help you get an idea in class. I realy love it maybe i should write so you could read my work.

Wow! I really like this story! I never thought ot would go like this! That angel thing is so awesome! These characters are developed in a very creative way. You can picture every one of them. I like Through the Icy Blue, but this is by far my favorite of your writings. I love picturing what Sky looks like with the Halo. I love how you describe it titling to the side, moving around...it's so cool! It reminds me SO much of the anime Hainbane Renmei. Oh dear...going off on anime...KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK!