| Reviews for Love |
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the word wielder 10/1/04 . chapter 1Short, to the point. And very enjoyable. Very good work :) |
Ayx 2/5/04 . chapter 1Some How I understand this poem on a more personal level as if it were in my own writing |
IHJ 10/26/03 . chapter 1Constructive criticism coming. A haiku is 3 lines, with the syllabic count being 5-7-5. Your poem isn't a haiku, but I'm sure with some tweaking, it could be one. It's kinda cute. -Izzy J. |
Blasphemequarantine 10/26/03 . chapter 1An haiku is a 3 line verse with 5-7-5 syllables respectively. 17 syllables. It has 18 syllables, so I'd say its clsoe enough. Yes, pretty much captured love here, and I do beleive it is that simple. |
xyellx 10/26/03 . chapter 1Doesn't a haiku only have three lines? |