Update!!

hi. im new to fp and im trying to get a feel for stories and stuff that other people put up.I read both chapters and i really like your story.Keep writing.I would like to know what you think of some of my writing Please r and i would like that.
mary

Wow, great story so far. I can't wait to read more. Update soon and keep up the great work!

Howdy.

This sounds good so far. It gives information and withholds it at the same time, keeps the reader insterested. I wanna know where this goes next :)

Thanks for the reviews! ;)

Hey. Cool. Right to the point. K. Speaking from a non-best-friend viewpoint I generally prefer things to be all stretched out (for example it normally takes forever for stuff to happen) but I can tell you've got some kind of cunning plan going on...mmyep.

Woo. Carry on with the tacos *does monkey dance*