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| KatyGirl1219 2003-11-01 ch 1,   | I don't think that the last two lines are exactly necessary to the flow of the poem. They kind of take away from the fluidity of it. But I do over all like the poem. It speaks a lot of how I feel. The imagery is great. Keep writing! ::hugs:: |
| Namir Swiftpaw 2003-10-26 ch 1, | This is almost exactly like the other one... And I liked the shorter one better. I dunno...try not to have your poems be SO similar. ~Namir Swiftpaw |