 JC-Saved-Me 2007-01-30 . chapter 1Hey this was beautiful. I'm sorry for your departure from fictionpress but I'm glad you've kept your work on here :-)
Bless you much in the Lamb
xRachx |
 Aimless Traveler 2005-01-27 . chapter 1Very touching. i have strayed away from God and i'm afraid my faith is a bit rusty...ok, very rusty. Your poem has inspired me to be so much more. thank you! |
 scudcrow 2004-10-10 . chapter 1Don't want to bore you with the "awe this is so nice" comments, but I was wondering if a possible outcome or understanding a this poem "should" lead me to belive that you're saying that Metal has been molded into you. Ex: a sword, nails--the causal factor of pain also molding into a walking stick, etc.? |
 Mormon Princess 1 2004-08-08 . chapter 1This is a nice poem.. I read your bio and It's a good thing to be firm in your faith. I mean gosh some people are just so cruel! |
 Caitir 2004-04-17 . chapter 1... *stunned silence, then stands and bursts into raucous applause* brilliant! this one... it's absolutely amazing in how you've brougt out the meaning of an object and somehow in doing so infused even more. everything about this is just... astounding. bravo. |
 Infinite Smiles 2004-02-21 . chapter 1QUITE BEAUTIFUL...I LOVE THE PHRASE " METAL WILL NEER MEAN MORE." IT SHOWS SUCH CONVICTION. |
 QueenRemge13 2004-01-07 . chapter 1I really liked it. Again, great poem. God Bless!
QR |
 Modern Poet 2004-01-07 . chapter 1Great symbolism once again. It makes you really appreciate what Jesus did for us. Moving piece. |
 Hail the Warrior 2004-01-05 . chapter 1Awesome...Awespiring, Awe...you get the picture? I wish I could wear my cross more but some people in my church find wearing a cross blaphemous...don't know why but hey, don't stir the water.
HtW |
 Aslan Israel 2003-12-31 . chapter 1Wow, that's deep. I'll never wear my cross again and forget what it really means.
God Bless |
 snowtiger13731 2003-12-15 . chapter 1Wow. Wonderfully powerful. Your poetry always inspires me to write poetry. It's beautiful.
§ julia § |
 Angel Believer 2003-12-14 . chapter 1I... I am humbled by the sincerity of the reviews you left my for my haikus. Thank you so much; they meant a lot to me.
I was even doubly humbled when I read your profile. It was a shock to learn not only of your faith, but of your incredible steadfastness in it. Lately I feel as if I've grown apart from the Father. But just visiting your BIO made me feel so much stronger spiritually.
Thank you. |
 Plato's Optic Runaway 2003-12-05 . chapter 1...
I...I'm not Christian, but I must say, I am strongly moved by this. Your power in simple majesty transcends most I've ever read... |
 RandomGoth 2003-12-01 . chapter 1wow im speechless!
You have an amazing talent, which couples so well with your talent!
Love it!
Yours in randomness!
RG |
 MauledBarbie 2003-11-29 . chapter 1sums up the power and belife we have in the cross perfectly - the cross and prayer are the only weapons we need against evil. they give us strength. great peom well done |