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| addie pray 2005-05-09 ch 1, | Haunting. Shivers and scars remind me of all those little girls. |
| MistrissD 2004-04-19 ch 1, | ...damn, I dont even know how to express how powerful this was. The storyline mixed with the lyrics just added so much more emphasis to this. Truly one of the best works I have ever experianced |
| Ciara Starr 2004-03-25 ch 1, | All I can say is...wow...its AMAZING! |
| Morgan 2003-11-17 ch 1, | Aly.. wow.. I found you. God.. its been so long since we've talked. Do you remember me? I got rid of AOL and got AIM. How have you been? You need to email me or IM me sometime. My AIM sn is SpOiLeDlilQt775. |
| sos 2003-11-13 ch 1, | I'm really proud of you for writing this, especially if it was hard for you to write. Thank you, this means a lot. I really love the song, I read it once with no music and read it through with Jonestown Tea on the ol speakers. It really works well when you got the song on aswell, freaked the crap out of me cus you know how powerful the song is and coupled with the story it blew me away. Thank you. A lot. I mean it. It had to be done. sos |
| Maddox Grey 2003-10-26 ch 1, | this was good, I understand your style but it could have had a litt more depth while maintiaing it. Jonestown Tea is a great song, personally I like Emtee the best though. Keep on writing! |
| enchanted-littlelies 2003-10-26 ch 1, | Wow this really follows the song. I love the song to begin with but what you did wtih it was amazing. Great job! |
| Michelle 2003-10-26 ch 1, | I usually stay away from these stories since they kind of hit a soft spot in me but since you were using one of otep's songs...it just got my attention. It's a good story. I hope to read more from you. |
| Jadah Krayne 2003-10-26 ch 1, | *bows* Wonderful, and haunting. So beautiful despite the subject matter. I know why it took you a year to write this, but it was definitely a year well spent. Keep writing, mi angel. |