Love the format of this first chapter. That back and forth thought processes.

Hehehe! SHRINKS SUCK! Yeah. Interesting _ I'm going to read the rest too. *puts it on her TODO list*

This plot sounds vaguely like Silence of the Lambs. Oh well still good.

LOL! i loved the last line! well this looks really really awesome! i've only read the first chapter, but i'll try to keep reading. Definitely a lot of typos, and i think you should've put what he was writing in italics, or parenthesis. I know you're already done but ill keep reviewing if you dont mind. *BOB34*

The title kills me! lol!

Great last comment from Bob. I don't know if it's meant to be a bit snippy, but...hm, yeah.

-Izzy J.

Oh, the typos must've sent your Spell-checker insane! Great chapter, I'll try to keep my reviews short so I can write an e-mail all about "red Reed Red" like you want. :)

-Izzy J.

And yes, I have been inadquately taught in movie classics. I have never watched, nor have any desire to see any Star Wars films.